Authors Note

This is my first book, so spelling and punctuation may be off just a tad bit and my sentences may flutter off topic from time to time, but all I want is for you to enjoy the book and to leave a comment of anything I need to fix. Also if you want to help me with setting deadlines and helping me with editing that would be great because I really need a rock. I’d also like to make this book out to my mom and my teachers that told me I should pursue writing so thank you Mr.Heatbrink and Mr.Erickson, also from time to time there will be crude language! Also here are some character details that i forgot to add T~T
~ Phienox: In human age she is 22 years old, but in the world of Melanthe ageing is slower so she looks and is 15 in her world. She has long hair that goes to her mid back it’s a rusty color, but sometimes it looks shiny red, she also has streaks of aqua blue stretching all around her hair. Her eye color is said to be unique in her world spotted brown hazel eyes with specks of orange are considered a threat or abnormal, but luckily for her from normal distant she looks to have dull brown eyes. She has a well-toned body that at times can be flexible enough to squeeze through jail bars, but due to the harsh life of abuse and training of the Lachrimae clan, or as they were once known as the clan of tears, her body has many scars including one that stretches from her stomach to her pelvis in which damaged her ovaries to ware it’s most likely she won’t ever have children. She trains hard but you would most likely see her running around late for something or see her lazing around sun bathing.
~Orrick: He has many mussels’ dark skin big bushy white beard and hair. In our world he is 100 years old but in his he is 93. Like Phienox he has many scars but his are from wars. He has dull blue eyes and he always carries around a certain sword called Sanguinaria or the bloody sword. He is mostly found with the elders or with his family.
~Alex: He is the same age as Phienox; he has black hair that is kept short and muddy green eyes. His body has almost no scars, he is pale and his body is skinny but not very strong. Most of the time he is either being a politician or is found lurking in the shadows but in a bad way, almost as if in a malicious way.
~Fay: golden hair and blue eyes, people call her the gold devil because of her raging temper and looks. Her parents were killed in a war long ago so she was left at the orphanage around a young age. People think she is “22” but that is not the case she in fact is older than Orrick, but even she doesn’t know this. She is usually found around Phienox hounding on her for forgetting something.