For a
second I thought I saw her silver eyes turn red and then I knew immediately
“This isn’t your true form either is it, for if it was the mist surrounding you
would be gone and so would the metal carvings.” The shock was obvious on her
face then she burst out laughing, as she was laughing red marks that looked
like claw marks appeared on her cheeks, the whites of her eyes turned blood red
as if the blood vessels popped and her eyes turned from silver to black with
hints of madness lying awake in there, her hair stood up a little like a cat
and changed from an almost pure silver to a tainted black with streaks of a disgusting
shade of yellow, and then her clothes changed from beautiful light white dress
to skin tight black leather pants with a fire pattern stretching up her legs,
her top was almost the same but the colors were switched and that the fire was
black, I felt danger and I knew that this form was also strong “If I kill you
then our real from will come out, I don’t care what the others say I’m tired of
taking the long way, you will die!” and then she started her attack.
Tuesday, April 23, 2013
Tuesday, April 16, 2013
The Beginning
When
light turns to darkness all shall end with that the child of Fire shall appear
the one who can turn darkness to light, one who can control the elemental
dragons. This child will be wretched to some and a divine goddess to others.
They will be accompanied by a faire, a silver witch, a lost king and a fox
demon. This child will be born in the Lachrimae clan.
As I woke up those exact words rang through my head, words are all
they are just words. As I got up to check my sundial for the time and looked over the land my
best friend ran into my tent and started screaming at me to wake up. As I crawled
to meet her I ended up tripping, hitting my head on the ground and ended up falling down at the feet of Fay, my best friend. As she helped me up she scowled
at me, making it known I had missed something important. “Phienox where have
you been the elders have been looking for you!” I smirked and said “What does
it matter they are just crazy old men who have nothing better to do than harass
poor warriors like me.” She hit me upside the head and practically threw me out of my tent. As I groaned she glared at me and said “If you have time to sigh you have time to walk, so get walking!”
As I woke up those exact words rang through my head, words are all
they are just words. As I got up to check my sundial for the time and looked over the land my
best friend ran into my tent and started screaming at me to wake up. As I crawled
to meet her I ended up tripping, hitting my head on the ground and ended up falling down at the feet of Fay, my best friend. As she helped me up she scowled
at me, making it known I had missed something important. “Phienox where have
you been the elders have been looking for you!” I smirked and said “What does
it matter they are just crazy old men who have nothing better to do than harass
poor warriors like me.” She hit me upside the head and practically threw me out of my tent. As I groaned she glared at me and said “If you have time to sigh you have time to walk, so get walking!”
As
I lazily trailed out
of my yard and to the town center, I thought about how most of the time the
grown villagers would scowl at me, as if I was a nuisance and that I didn’t belong
like the other orphans. Most of the orphans are pittied, at least the
ones who were born from parents that the village knew. There are only two
other children like me who were left on a doorstep and no one knew who our parents were. Most likely our parents were outsiders; I know mine were because villagers were more disrespectful to me than the other unknowns; that’s what they call us, unknowns. As I reached the elders tents I was attacked. They choked me till some of my vision when blank, I threw them off crouched and then kicked their feet from under them, and then I pressed my knee to their chest. As my vision cleared I gasped, I removed my knee and bowed for it was one of the mightiest elders, Orrick.
grown villagers would scowl at me, as if I was a nuisance and that I didn’t belong
like the other orphans. Most of the orphans are pittied, at least the
ones who were born from parents that the village knew. There are only two
other children like me who were left on a doorstep and no one knew who our parents were. Most likely our parents were outsiders; I know mine were because villagers were more disrespectful to me than the other unknowns; that’s what they call us, unknowns. As I reached the elders tents I was attacked. They choked me till some of my vision when blank, I threw them off crouched and then kicked their feet from under them, and then I pressed my knee to their chest. As my vision cleared I gasped, I removed my knee and bowed for it was one of the mightiest elders, Orrick.
As
he burst out laughing I felt my face go red, “Stand young Phienox, you have
grown stronger I see, have you been practicing more often?” As I started to
stand I felt jugging eyes on me, “Alex what are you doing here?” as I said this
look of shock came over Orrick’s face but it quickly disappeared like a snap of
a dragon fly’s wings. “Heh seems you’re not as hot headed as you once were
unknown.” he spat out maliciously. As my eyes hardened with disgust I snapped
back “And it seems you are still a weak rich boy who only knows the life of
luxury and manipulation.” I turned
around to see him running towards me as to attack, I got into position to knock
him flat on his back. “Stop it Alex, she will just beat you any way and may
even kill you, so live to fight another day, damn it!” said Orrick in a loud
commanding voice. A look of shock came over Alex’s face. As I snickered Orrick
very sternly said “Phienox unless you wish to have cleaning duty.” I immediately
sobered up and this time Alex was the one silently snickering. As I scowled at
Alex Orrick threatened Alex with the same thing, after Orrick was done chewing
us out he finally sent Alex away. As I sighed with relief Orrick glanced at me
and said “You two can’t even be in the same room any more, I wonder what
happened to the young kids who were best friends?” I grumbled back “he was the
one that changed everything, he wanted to control me, and I wanted freedom.
That doesn’t matter anymore, now will you please tell me why I was called
here?” Orrick gave me a sad look and said in a somber tone “You are being
called for to be evaluated.” I replied in a questioning tone “Evaluated for
what?” Orrick look me straight in the eye and said “Evaluated to see if you are
the child of fire, and if you are you will be placed in isolation in the dark
room till we know what to do with you, if you are the child of fire.”
As I
thought about what he said I pushed that dream even farther back into my mind. When
we reached the back of the tent he turned around and produced a black blindfold
and said “Sorry phi (sorry but if you’re wondering its pronounced fhi I will
only interrupt from time to time) but you have to put this on.” I must have had
a questioning look because he quickly added “It’s so you won’t be able to come
back and steal a certain thing.” As I felt my cheeks go red with frustration I
yelled out “Why would I steal something that I have no use for, hell I don’t
even know what it is!” As Orrick’s face hardened he said in a voice that
chilled me to the bone “Unless you desperately want me to throw you in a bag
like a barbarian grunt I would just put it on instead of being a stubborn
wench, we won’t have any problems.” As I felt like retaliating I thought it
through and deemed it best to just set my pride away. As I snatched the blind
fold away I heard him grunt in approval, so as I put it on I muttered “Control
freak.” Once it was on correctly he grabbed my arm and we started walking.
As we
walked I would trip on everything and started getting frustrated, I felt as if
I was being mocked and laughed at. I felt a sudden rage come out of my chest it
felt as hot as fire, like it could consume me everything around me, it quickly
went out as if a splash of water came over it. As my feelings continued to
change I felt fear coming over me, “I can’t breathe” I said then I started
screaming I can’t breathe over and over again I started thrashing around trying
to breathe. I felt Orrick grab me and pin me on the ground and felt his hand
strike my face, as I came out of my hysteria I felt his hands loosen I
apologized and said thank you “Is it okay if I take it off now?” I asked he
mumbled something that seemed like a yes. As it slipped off my face I looked
around and saw a dessert in front of me, a tropical forest to my left, to my
right a dark wood land and behind me I
saw meadows as far as the eye could see. I was stunned beyond belief and right
in the middle of all of it was this temple, not a big one and not a small one,
as we entered I saw five cups that stood out the most the first one was on fire,
the second had water in it, the third had a bunch of dirt in it, the fourth one
had nothing in it but had a glass covering the top, and the last one was also
empty but had blood stains all over it.
As I felt
my pulse race like a falling star falling from the heavens I felt Orrick give
me a nudge to continue to walk at once basic human instinct turned on and
started begging me to run, *But I have nothing to run from, I’m not guilty so
why am I so scared?* I thought to myself. I felt a heavy hand on my shoulder
“It’s going to be fine phi, most likely the only damage you’ll get is a tiny
scar on your hand, but that’s only for a little bit of blood I promise you will
be fine.” He whispered to me. As I looked up at him through my bangs I immediately
felt better and gave him a weak smile and said “Thank you, you’re like a father
to me, so I trust you Orrick thank you once again.” He snickered and scratched
his chin “Well if that’s how you feel then call me big daddy.” He said in the
most snarkiest tone ever that it made me laugh so hard I thought I might lose a
lunge. A slam reverberated throughout the temple, and out of pure habit I
snapped strait up and cleared my face from all of the laughter before “It’s
time to start the ceremony.” Said a man in a dark cloak that covered his whole
body, immediately I didn’t trust him and knew that there was darkness
surrounding that man.
I took a
step back, to them it must of looked like I was about to run, so Orrick grabbed
my arm and walked me to the center of the temple. As the dark man started
walking towards me I felt the urge to do two things the first and strongest was
to kill him the second was to run as far as I could “Hold your hand out.” Said
the man in a tone that almost said “If you run I will kill you.” I shakily rose
my hand up, as quick as lightning he cut my hand. I cried out of surprise and
held my hand to my chest, “Give your blood to all of the cups, if they react in
strange ways we will have our answer.” Said Orrick in a light comforting tone,
I frowned at the strange man and walked over to the cup on fire, I held my hand
over the fire and squeezed out blood, nothing happened so I gave a relieved
sigh. As I started on the earth cup the fire turned blue and the flames
increased in size, as this happened my eyes went as wide as the moon. “Her
eyes, check her eyes!” screamed the man in the cloak Orrick moved towards me
when out of no ware a woman in a grey tattered dress and cloak appeared right
in front of me, as her hood fell I caught sight of sliver white hair before she
disappeared once again she reappeared in front of Orrick, she sent a side kick
to his gut at first he blocked, but when he leg made contact she sent him
across the temple, he slammed into the wall and as he connected with the wall
it shattered into tiny piece’s.
I screamed at Orrick hoping that he was ok but
as I tried walking to him shadows wrapped around my body making it impossible
for me to move. As the woman stood up she looked at the man but at the same
time it also seemed as if she was keeping her face hidden from my eyes “How
nice to see you Blake.” Said the silver haired woman, the man started laughing
and said “As always it’s a pleasure to see you Silver Star, how’s your mother
been since I cursed her?” under that cloak I swear he must have been giving her
a dark smirk that could have scared a thousand dragons. “I mean after all you
grey witches need to be put in your place every once in a hundred years.” Said
Blake
“Shut the
hell up Blake you know as well as I do that if my clan wanted to we could kill
you with a snap of our fingers.” At once
they both ran towards each other, they were so fast I could barely see their
moves, but it was obvious that Blake was faster and stronger. A loud boom came
out of no ware and a strike of lighting struck Blake, he fell to the ground he
seemed to be unconscious and as he fell Silver Star fell down to her knees and
snapped at me in a voice that could make poison seem harmless “Hey you, girl
with the dumb look on her face we don’t have much time till he wakes up, so I’m
thinking its time to blow this joint.”
I walked
towards her “Do you need help up?” I asked and finally I saw this woman’s face,
just like her hair her eyes were a sliver grey and her skin was very white she
also had a pink lotus tattoo on her forehead it was small and did not seem like
something this woman would have. To men she would be very beautiful but she
seemed to have a stern no nonsenses look on her face that could probably scare
any man away from her. “What do you think?” She snapped at me, I wrapped my
hand around her waist and put her hand around my neck and hauled her up. I
started walking towards Orrick to pick him up also “What are you doing?” she
all but practically yelled in my ear so I yelled back “getting Orrick, what
else would I be doing?” “He’s dead, no one could survive my kick.” I started
laughing and said “As if that man if one of our leaders, he can’t die from a measly
kick.” She screeched back “measly kick!”
she shouted in an out raged voice “MY kick could easily break a mountain if I
wished it.” “Sounds like you’re bragging, you’re just a dog with a loud bark
but no bite.” I said clacking my teeth just to irritate her even more, “That
sounds like a challenge, so I accept this quest and I’ll enjoy watching you pay
for it.” She said in the most condescending tone that could make a mountain
monk kill her, but then an idea popped in my head “If you’re so confident then
how about a bet?”
“What
kind of bet?” she asked with a suspicious voice “If I win you stay by my side
and follow my orders, if you win well you can decide what you want.” I could practically see her ears perking up,
hook, line and sinker I thought, “Okay, so what will we be placing this bet on?”
she asked with her voice filled with a sickening amount of over confidence I swear
I almost choked right then and there. “If you can put a crack that reaches the
very top of Katash wei' vorki (kah-TASH whey VOR-key) (in English tong
dragon mountain) witch out destroying it.” This task I knew would probably be impossible
but you never know so I’ll make sure she can’t break that mountain. “Are you
fucking kidding me?! That mountain is well known for being infested with dragons
AND to top on all of that it’s said to be guarded by a devil!” she screamed in
quite an outraged voice to ware I thought my ear drums were going to pop out of
my head and say adios. “We can discuss
this later I think it would be beneficial for both of us if we get a move on,
so will you make yourself of use and help me get Orrick up?” I said in an
almost equal tone of voice. “Fine, but I will not let you off of this at all!”
“Damn
this brute his heavy” said Sliver “Just shut up and stop complaining! Do you
even know where we’re going?” I said feeling my breath running out “Who do you
think you are, of course I know I am a grey witch after all.” So much arrogance
I thought “What’s so special about that?” I asked “It’s the greatest honor and
the greatest burden.” Her tone of voice surprised me; it was gentle almost as
sweet as golden syrup. As I looked over at her she looked completely different,
before her eyes her like greyish silver shards of ice but now they seemed to be
glowing silver almost holy, her hair went to mid back to reaching to her knees it
also seemed to be glowing something mystic about it, but what stood out the
most was the things that appeared her clothes went from torn dress and cloak to
grey torn gypsy clothes but with the same cloak, Her lotus tattoo had disappeared
she had a staff that was wooden but had metal carvings in it that seemed like
wind but what was startling was that they were moving like actual wind. “W-what
are you?” I asked fear obviously in my voice, she gave me a smile that could
melt butter and said “this is my true form, I was cursed at a very young age it’s
a curse ware I can only be myself, my true form, once every month, coincidently
it also keeps me from using all my powers.” “Why didn’t you tell me earlier,
and why of all times did you come out now?” I asked I felt so confused with all
these thoughts running through my head “because I need your help to break my
curse.”
Authors Note
This is my first book, so spelling and punctuation may be off just a tad bit and my sentences may flutter off topic from time to time, but all I want is for you to enjoy the book and to leave a comment of anything I need to fix. Also if you want to help me with setting deadlines and helping me with editing that would be great because I really need a rock. I’d also like to make this book out to my mom and my teachers that told me I should pursue writing so thank you Mr.Heatbrink and Mr.Erickson, also from time to time there will be crude language! Also here are some character details that i forgot to add T~T
~ Phienox: In human age she is 22 years old, but in the world of Melanthe ageing is slower so she looks and is 15 in her world. She has long hair that goes to her mid back it’s a rusty color, but sometimes it looks shiny red, she also has streaks of aqua blue stretching all around her hair. Her eye color is said to be unique in her world spotted brown hazel eyes with specks of orange are considered a threat or abnormal, but luckily for her from normal distant she looks to have dull brown eyes. She has a well-toned body that at times can be flexible enough to squeeze through jail bars, but due to the harsh life of abuse and training of the Lachrimae clan, or as they were once known as the clan of tears, her body has many scars including one that stretches from her stomach to her pelvis in which damaged her ovaries to ware it’s most likely she won’t ever have children. She trains hard but you would most likely see her running around late for something or see her lazing around sun bathing.
~Orrick: He has many mussels’ dark skin big bushy white beard and hair. In our world he is 100 years old but in his he is 93. Like Phienox he has many scars but his are from wars. He has dull blue eyes and he always carries around a certain sword called Sanguinaria or the bloody sword. He is mostly found with the elders or with his family.
~Alex: He is the same age as Phienox; he has black hair that is kept short and muddy green eyes. His body has almost no scars, he is pale and his body is skinny but not very strong. Most of the time he is either being a politician or is found lurking in the shadows but in a bad way, almost as if in a malicious way.
~Fay: golden hair and blue eyes, people call her the gold devil because of her raging temper and looks. Her parents were killed in a war long ago so she was left at the orphanage around a young age. People think she is “22” but that is not the case she in fact is older than Orrick, but even she doesn’t know this. She is usually found around Phienox hounding on her for forgetting something.
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